The main trouble that I also had with this image is the complicated an awkward mix of different colours and tones. I felt as though the illustration was being transformed in to something of a cartoon, which my stance is against for this project.
Since producing this, I've completed a 2nd A2 illustration, keeping similar to his posture and setting, but keeping to just one main colour (of a light turquoise to portray him as weak). I also took on board alot of comments from my final critique, where I have illustrated Blair from behind in a suit, his normal situation if you like, to place emphasis on the idea of him being stripped and exposed in a very personal setting.
The final touch I made to my final exhibition piece was the inclusion of a snippet of an over sized newspaper article to give the illustration a purpose and physical context, as well as scale, as if the illustration has been blown up to 10x it's normal size. This wasn't something I had ever considered in the later days of the project until Graham asked "why?" the illustration existed, and as ever I was stumped and felt as I normally do in crits with Graham, weak.
But after I spoke to Matt and explained my idea of using text and the suit to fill his back, and I felt reassured this was a good move to make in the end.
Hopefully I'll upload a photo tomorrow of the finished article.
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